Friday, 26 May 2017

Poetic Writing - Year 4&5 - Elliot

We have been learning how to take our ideas and simple sentences and craft them into great poetic writing.
Year 4-5
LI: 
We will turn our 7 sentences into a poem
SC:
We will be successful if we use:

  • parts of speech (adverbs and adjectives)
  • Alliteration (dark, dusty, dirt or Sitting on sparkly soil)
  • at least one simile (like a stick insect or like a weak crumbling old post)
  • at least 1 onomatopoeia (swoosh, swish, buuuuzzzz, pft or whooooo)
We work together if we need help choosing the best place to break a line for effect.

One of my best objects
it makes a swoosh swish swoosh
like the ocean
and blends in with nature
it feels fragile
it is dark, dirty, and dusty
the leaves get made in many different ways
Elliot

1 comment:

  1. Hi Elliot I like the way you used a onomatopoeia and lots of parts of speech well done!

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