Friday, 26 May 2017

Poetic Writing - Year 6-8 - Jessica G

AO: We understand why we are writing - what's the purpose - and can shape/craft our ideas with effect
LI: We will choose the most effective Poetic Devices to help craft our visual image/poem
SC: We will use -
  • sophisticated parts of speech (pronouns, adverbs, adjectives, and prepositions)
  • Simile and.or metaphor
  • Repetition
  • Enjambment
The Fern

In the bush the ferns grow where green and brown colours swallow the mush

In the bush I am as big as a ruby ball

which means I’m quite small

In the bush with rough and delicate leaves I shall rip quite easily

In the bush I am a curvy triangle, like the leaves, the flax and sometimes the trees

While I blow in the breeze the bush talks, my fury stalk extends, I may not have many jobs,

But I love to represent New Zealand with each leaf I grow

Jessica Gallant

3 comments:

  1. Hi Jess, I love the way you have crafted your visual image with words like delicate, furry stalk extends, and colours swallow the mush! You have definitely thought about your purpose for writing and shaping your ideas with effect. Miss J

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  2. Kia Ora Jess.
    Wowwww! I love ferns they are really cool. Mostly because I love the ferns! But anyway I love your descriptive writing!
    Na Ella

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  3. hello I like the way you did this I like it wow you really know how to do your blogging post for your school how long did it takee you to do this.bye for now Rodeshar

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